Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, April 13, 2012

how to construct an argumentative essay


Planning Stage
For an argument essay to be effective, it must contain certain elements. For this reason, you must take a few minutes to plan and prepare before you jump into writing an argument essay.
Find a Good Topic
To find good topic for an argument essay you should consider several issues that will have two conflicting points of view or very different conclusions. As you look over a list of topics you should find one that really sparks your interest.
While a strong interest in a topic is important, it's not enough to be interested. You have to consider what position you can back up with reasoning and evidence. It's one thing to have a strong belief, but when shaping an argument you'll have to explain why your belief is reasonable and logical.
As you explore the topics, make a mental list of points you could use as evidence for or against an issue.
Consider Both Sides of Your Topic and Take a Position
Once you have selected a topic you feel strongly about, you should make a list of points for both sides of the argument and pick a side. One of your first objectives

Argumentative Essay CORRUPTOR SHOULD BE GIVEN DEATH SENTENCE


Corruptors are the parasite for the development of our country. The benefits are great for the people of Indonesia when there is not corruption anymore. A prosperous Indonesia is not a dream. There are so many corruptor cases in Indonesia, thus corruptors should be given death sentence. There are three argument the corruptor should get death sentence that are to scare the people to do corruption, to decrease the number of corruption in Indonesia, and to increase the pride of Indonesia to the world’s perspective.
Death sentence can scare the people to do corruption. The punishment that given to corruptor is really weak. The legal basis for criminal (civil) corruption is Law No. 31 of 1999 on Combating Corruption, which is then updated with the Act No. 20 of 2001. In the Act, set how many prison sentences and fines of minimum and maximum for those found guilty of corruption. The penalties range from 1 year up to a maximum of

Thursday, March 29, 2012

DRAFT example: Advantage of Cat as Housepet

Introduction
cats make excellent housepets as they are good companions, they are civilized members of the household, and they are easy to care for.
Body
1.     Cats are good companion
-        They are lovely
-        They are playfull and active
-        Cats can be trained
2.     Cats are civilized members of the household
-        They do not bark and make a loud noise
-        They are calm and quite
-        Rare to broke anything
3.     We easy to take care of them
-        They can take care of themselves
-        We do not have to take them for a walk

Sunday, February 12, 2012

Discourse Marker: Sentence Example

EXAMPLE OF ADDITIONAL
-         Community colleges offer preparation for many occupation.
-         They prepare students to transfer to a four year college or university.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator
Community colleges offer preparation for many occupation and they prepare students to transfer to a four year college or university.
2.     Adverbial connective
Community colleges offer preparation for many occupation in addition they prepare students to transfer to a four year college or university.

EXAMPLE OF CAUSE AND RESULT
          Cause : Burning fossil fuels causes serious damage to our planet.
          Result : We need to develop other sources of energy.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator

Discourse Marker: sentence example

EXAMPLE OF CONTRAST
-         Last night, I though I would get up early.
-         This morning, I got up at 8 o’clock.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator
Last night, I though I would get up early, but this morning, I got up at 8 o’clock
2.     Subordinated
Although last night I though I would get up early, this morning, I got up at 8 o’clock.
3.     Adverbial connective
Last night, I though I would get up early, however, this morning, I got up at 8 o’clock.

EXAMPLE OF CAUSE AND RESULT
          Cause : There are many jobless in Indonesia that have low skill.
          Result : Our government face difficulties in managing them.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator
There are many jobless in Indonesia that have low skill so our government face

sentences example: make a sentence different ways using discourse markers

EXAMPLE OF CAUSE AND RESULT
          Cause : Bryan always sleep late at night.
          Result : He never get up early.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator
Bryan always sleep late at night so he never get up early.
2.     Subordinated
Because Bryan always sleep late at night, he never get up early
3.     Adverbial connective
Bryan always sleep late at night; as a result, he never get up early.

EXAMPLE OF ADDITIONAL
-         My mother asks me to buy some umbrellas.
-         She gives me enough money.
When they linked be:
1.     Coordinator

Friday, February 10, 2012

Analysis Of Young Goodman Brown By Nathaniel Hawthome

The Analysis

Title                 : Young Goodman Brown
Author             : Nathaniel Hawthorne

I.          Content
A.    Setting
§   Time
Actually, then main time setting in this story is set in seventh century, and the specific time are in the afternoon, at sunset, night, and in the morning.
“Young Goodman Brown came forth at sunset….” First line of paragraph 1, page 1.
“…, the sky, at the hour of midnight” 8th line of 3rd paragraph, page 6.
§   Place
The story of Young Goodman Brown is toke place in Salem Village, at his home and the street and in the forest where Holy ritual toke place.
“Young Goodman Brown came forth at sunset at Salem Village…” First line of paragraph 1, page 1.
“…after crossing the threshold….” 2nd line of paragraph 1, page 1
“….it was deep dusk in the forest…”1st line of paragraph 13, page 1

Why it is Important to Learn English

The English language is one of the most widely spoken languages in the world, second only to Mandarin. That English is used almost everywhere is just one of the many advantages of learning the English language. There are many advantages of learn english, it will be useful for everything, everywhere, and whoever.
The English language is the primary language of business throughout the world. Most international business transactions, including emails, memos, reports and contracts are written in the English language.
Having the ability to fluently speak the English language as well as one's native language can be very beneficial to those seeking job opportunities with international companies. The ability to speak a language that is spoken by most business people can place the job seeker a step ahead of the competition.
 Major Hollywood movies have dialogue that is spoken in the English language. The plot of these movies is easier to follow if the person watching the movie speaks English. Subtitles in other languages can sometimes cause the meanings of words to be lost in the translation, and they can be a distraction or even block the action that is taking place on the screen.

 Since the English language is one that is predominantly spoken throughout the world, international travelers may find that speaking English can make their travels a little easier. Most hotel and restaurant employees, as well as store merchants, will probably speak English at least to some degree.

Typical foods of Southeast Sulawesi

by: Rezki Aulia

I am Javanese but I was born in Kendari. Even though, I am Javanese I know a little about typical foods of Southeast Sulawesi. I can mention sinonggi that is famous typical food of Kendari. Sinonggi is made from sago. And sago derived from sago tree. We should peel the sago tree until smooth. After that sago is filtered to get concentrate. Then, we can use sago to make sinonggi. We should mix sago with hot water in making sinonggi. Sinonggi is also served with fish generally white fish in order that the taste can be suitable. Sinonggi is the most popular food for Tolakinese and Kabaenanese. Eating sinonggi also becomes a symbol of kinship. The other typical food of Southeast Sulawesi is tuna. Tuna is plentiful in the sea of Southeast Sulawesi. One of the most popular methods of cooking the tuna, there is dousing it with lime juice and grilling it. It can then be enjoyed with a coconut milk sauce seasoned with shallots, finely sliced lemon grass and sour fruit or belimbing sayur, the usual souring agent. Actually there are many people like the typical foods from Southeast Sulawesi like my friend from east Java who had visited me last year. He was very enjoyable when I served him the dishes such as sinonggi, tuna bake, coconut ice etc. when I asked my friend what he liked about the typical foods of Southeast Sulawesi. He smiled and said the dishes were as delicious as the dishes from the restaurant. There are still a lot of typical foods from Southeast Sulawesi such as sanggara mekongga, sate pokea, bamboo rice, jambu mete etc. Sanggara mekongga is a dish made from steamed

The advantages and the disadvantages working on or out of campus


 Working on campus is fast becoming a popular option among students. There are many perks that can help lighten the load for a struggling student. One of the main reasons work-study jobs are the best option is the fact that your salary will not be deducted from any scholarship or grant you may be receiving. Although some might think working while studying will bring down a student’s performance, it is not actually true. Studies indicate that students who have work-study jobs actually do better than their jobless counterparts. In fact, depending on the type of job, you might actually study more than the other students. Those working late shifts have always found some time to open their books and read.
             The jobs that the university offers you are not just rewarding economically, but also give you the right sort of experience you need for your future. It’s a perfect symbiosis between the university and the student. The university gets help and the students get the proper know-how, and not to mention a little extra pocket money. Work-study jobs, no matter what people say, pay you well. The universities are obliged to follow the minimum wage set by their respective states. These can range anywhere. It depends on the state

Thursday, February 9, 2012

MY IDEAL HOUSE


At first, when I thought of my future, married and have a family, I wanted to buy a big land for building my ideal house. But of course it will be step by step to build the house. We have to stay in a small house first while work hard to earn money and saving for the ideal house. The location is far, not too far from the town but I have neighbour. Because I don’t like pollution, especially sound pollution and air pollution. Although far from the town, I don’t mind because I dream to buy cars and motorcycle. So it will be easy to reach the town.
The house is a two story house with ten rooms and white color. The roof is red. From the front, the house have high hedge around so we will feel safe and when we come into, we will pass a small bridge with a little stony fishpond under the bridge. The front yard is coverred with green plants and flowers and also 2 manggo trees. There is a couple of swing too.
In the front, there is veranda. There is a garage in the left side of my house. The first room is front room with ellegant sofas and well furnished.  And then my room with a clean bath room. My room will be rather big because I’ll combine with working room. Next, there is a family room with modern television, DVD player, and sound system placed in a big table. My dinning room is behind the family room. It has a glass tile, under it is like an aquarium but placed under the dinning room. So when we are eating, we may see many gold fish under.

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

My first day at Haluoleo University by Rezki Aulia Hendarta

          When I was at Haluoleo University, I felt very nervous and doubt because it was the new experience for me as a university student. I felt coming in the new situation that I had not experienced before. The first thing that I saw at first day was the different situation. There were many buildings which different from my school building at senior high school. There were many students who put on free clothes. It was different from senior high school. I put on uniform when I was at senior high school. Then, I tried to recognize more detail about my new campus, even though I had been described by my seniors when I was freshmen orientation. After that, I sought my new friends who joined same class with me. I felt happy because I met many new friends. I used the first day to seek a lot of friends because I knew that there were students from various ethnics around the Southeast Sulawesi, whereas I was from Java. I was strongly interested to know and comprehend the Southeast Sulawesi culture from my new friends. I realized that I had to adapt to all of my new friends. Because I would face difficult situation next time if I did not adapt well. After we had introduced one another, we faced the first university lecture namely IIC. There were six lecturers for IIC subject. Thus, the first lecturer who gave us the first lecture was Mr.Firdaus Saleh. He explained about IIC to us. He said that IIC was the basic subject of English department curriculum and influenced our motivation. Therefore, he suggested that we had to study hard. Mr. Firdaus also said that we had to get A or B for IIC subject because we would find bad academic cumulative if we got C or D even E. From his elaboration, I

Journal Writing: THE BOOK THAT I LIKE READING MOST

            Sometimes, I really like reading book. I like to do it because may be the story is very popular, is a good story, and may be have many words that can help me to be able to become a writer. I like reading the story of Mahkota Cinta. This book is written by Habiburrahman El Shirazy. This book tells us about the meaning of hard work and patient. It shows us how the characters manage their time between school, work and religion, too. The main character is Zul. He is a javanesse man who want to change his life to be better in Malaysia. Beside that he also wants to find jobs. Anything he will do with the term it is not forbidden. In Malaysia, he used to manage his time between work, school and pray. Even he just sleep in unusual time, may be just 3 or 4 hours. He had a terrible day since he did not find the woman he loves, Mari. Mari is a woman who helps Zul in the ship when he was confuse about Malaysia. But after he got many explanation by his religious roommate, he could live normally again until he finished his magister program and back to Indonesia. In Indonesia he found a job and the woman and marries her. By reading this book, I realize that we really need hard work to reach success. We also must always remember to Allah who gives us everything we need to live.

Journal Writing: STUDENTS AND DEMONSTRASION

            Demonstration is the activity of university students to show to our government about the society problems. We often see some of students make a movement on the street to struggle what they think something should be forced. The idealism of university students is often society voice. But sometimes, there is something that makes them to do that without idealism or society morality. May be they do it because they are asked by someone to do demonstration and they are given money. But I think the students will feel confident or be the true student if they do demonstration. Some of students who we can recognize as the activist know about the student’s roles such as agent of control, agent of social, and agent of change. Some of them do it but always care with their study. In fact, mostly we see that they do not care with their study on campus, they just do demonstration that we do not know what they finding is while study in the university, we just guest and guest, when will they pass this university? Do they will just demonstration without thinking their parents in the village who really hope them to pass immediately? The answer comes from the activists. It is right to do demonstration with a right reason, too, but we must also remember to our school. Demonstration is good, it will be better if we are not overactive to do this activity.

Journal Writing: WHY IT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU TO LEARN ENGLISH

           It is very important for us to learn English. Most of us know that English is an international language so we must able to understand English for the globalization. Having the ability to fluently speak the English language like their native language can be a benefit to somebody who is seeking job opportunities with international companies. The ability to speak a language which is spoken by most business people can place the job seekers a step ahead of the competition. The English language is dominantly used as the language of academics all over the world, with a large amount of research conducted, written and presented in English. The English language can be a very helpful tool for many scholars to give their ideas and research findings. When we are able to use English language, it will widen our knowledge. We must know that many knowledge in the world is written and record in English. Automatically, when we want to learn something or want to express our idea to other people in the world, we must use English. That will make us so lucky if we able to use this language, our knowledge will increase and will not have problem when we study from the journal, literature, books, internet, etc. So, English is clearly very useful for us, especially in English department, we must able to understand English.

Journal Writing: My Hobbies

            There are a lot of things to do in my free time. One of them is doing something interesting or do my hobbies. My hobby is playing guitar. I like playing guitar because it is easy to play, simple and easy to understand the way to play. Fortunately, I have learnt to play it since I was in the second grade of junior high school. But I do not want to be a guitarist. It is not my idea. Play guitar just for entertaining myself. My other hobby is watching TV. I like watching  news, national and international. I love watching football match especially Barclays Premiere League. I also like watching Indonesian football but just when they play in a big league or rivaling another country. Watching culinary also often I do in my free time. I like listening to music, too. And my hobby which I do every Saturday is browsing the internet. I don’t have a modem so I go to internet cafĂ© and bring my flash disk to copy necessary information. By watching and browsing the internet, I can know what I don’t know, I can be like I’m in a place of the information I get, also wider my knowledge and entertain myself.

Journal Writing: My Favorite Reading

            There are a lot of books to read, but one of my favorite reading is the story titled Mahkota Cinta. This book is written by Habiburrahman El Shirazy. I like the story because it’s words is well organized. We can enter a new world where there are some people with hard work and very religious. This book tells us about the meaning of hard work and patient. It shows us how to manage time between school and work. Many people are success although in the past they are very hard to work and study. They work and study overseas, in Malaysia. The main actor used to manage his time between work, school and pray. Even he just sleep in unusual time, may be just 3 or 4 hours. He had a terrible day since he did not find the woman he loves. But after he got many explanation by his religious roommate, he could live normally again until he finished his magister program and back to Indonesia. In Indonesia he found the woman and marry her. By reading this book, I realize that we really need hard work to reach success. We also must always remember to Allah who gives us everything we need to live. I think the book can be an inspiration for me and for other people.

Journal Writing: Kendari City

            I have been living in Kendari city for 18 years. Now, Kendari have been developing. I still remember 10 years ago when Kendari was very different with now. There was some old buildings and the facilities were not as good as now. Now, the old buildings have change to the new and more modern. The facilities increase day to day. There are many tribes that live in Kendari, such as Munanese, Butonese, Kabaenanese, etc. But Tolakinese is the original tribe of Kendari city. Beside that, there are also many tribes from another province like Torajanese, Chinese, Javanese, Balinese, etc. There is Asma’ul Husnah Monumen. It built when Kendari have a turn to be the place for MTQ in 2006. Our government always ask their people to keep the cleanness all around the city. Kendari also have received “Adipura” because of our cleanness. Kendari city is the place of education and finding jobs for many people. Kendari has many education place. Many schools have an international standard. Many Universities, course place, and province’s library. Jobs are offered by many entrepreneurs so some people come from another place to get jobs. Kendari also have many places where we can have fun and fulfill our needs, like mall, supermarket, market, boutique, restaurant, karaoke house, swimming pool, family fishing pool, etc. I think Kendari will always develop in the future.

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

REPORTING TEXT : ENVIRONTMENTAL FISHING METHODS


A. Make 10 questions from the text.
1.      How were the survival rates for saithe and cod during high and low fishing intensity periods?
2.      What does the result showed by the survival project ?
3.      Who did fund the survival project in 2003?
4.      Who do the fish that have the poorest swimming ability and will tire quickly?
5.      What should be avoided according to the experiments of mackerel?
6.      Why is the  smallest fish that are most likely to die?
7.     What’s the function of Nordmore grid?
8.     Where is the scientists come from in survival project?
9.      What is the two identical large floating net pens through a transfer channel of mackerel?
10.   What is the difference in survival between different length-groups of whitting and haddock?

B.  Report and list main ideas of each paragraph.
1.    The principal objective of the fish capture research is the development of resource and environtmentally friendly commercial fishing gears and the provision of better tools for ecosystem and stock monitoring.
2.    Behavioral observations in and around various fishing gears have been used to develop more species and size selective fishing gears.

Journal Writing: Air Pollution

            In our life, we breathe oxygen. But how if the air is polluted? We must know that air pollution is happened to the air that is contaminated by other dangerous substances and disturb us in respiration and other. Air pollution source is from human activity and natural activity. Human activities are transportation, electricity generator, industry, burning activities, and the most simple is cigarette smoke. And from natural activities are volcanic, fire, and nitrification process. It can give bad influence to our respiration. The dangerous substance can reach our lung. It can cause bronchitis and asthma. It also have a big function in increasing the global warming and broke the ozone layer. It can make some plants become unhealthy. So, to anticipate it, we must keep our air to not to polluted so we can breathe well. Unless, we should keep environment by planting trees and minimize our use of things that can pollute the air like vehicles, burning tools and cigarette smoke. I think it’s not too easy but it’s not too hard, too. The most important thing is to believe and always try to anticipate it. Don’t forget that this world can be broke because of air pollution.